Solo
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yasmet/Yasser (703)
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from edwin/Edwin K.W. (152,420) 
on November 20, 2009 7:30:49 PM CST
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I like the tight crop for this butterfly Yasser, but a little more headroom and some space on the left side is preferred. Good sharpness, exposure and coloring on the butterfly wing but I think some more details can be rescued on the head part, particularly on the eye by PS shadow tool.
Cheers......Edwin
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butterfly
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norm/Norman (554)
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from edwin/Edwin K.W. (152,420)
on November 20, 2009 7:23:15 PM CST
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A nice catch Norman, but I think a tighter crop could help to bring in more impact by delivering more details on the subject whilst eliminating those brighter green and pink in the background that draw away my attention. A little too far on sharpening I think, evident from the icy pixelation on the butterfly wing texture.
Cheers......Edwin
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butterfly
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norm/Norman (554)
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from jodact/Joda (1,256)
on November 20, 2009 7:16:47 PM CST
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Great subject, rendered impeccably. Maybe a little extra at the top could be cropped, but I see substantially nothing negative.
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Gallery
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martinlj/Martin (704)
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from mojaveh/Mehrdad (7,309)
on November 20, 2009 7:16:12 PM CST
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Good Job Martin. First I like your Idea as its a bit rare here. Second, you adjusted well photo frame. The wall strip is kept almost the same all over the image while ground is expanding from left to right. I just wish you could move a bit left or right to capture both images completely or take right image and the wall notes together. Good Luck. Mehrdad
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Peace
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ozeralper/Alper (610)
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from mojaveh/Mehrdad (7,309)
on November 20, 2009 7:12:55 PM CST
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Alper, its excellent landscape shot. Its clear and sharp. As HDRI, I expect brighter colors. So, for this I prefer resubmitting in B&W too. Contrast of your photo is quite enough to do that. Other aspects like frame adjustment and camera angle and the way land goes to the right side of frame are great. Good Luck. Mehrdad
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Chelsea
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canonuser/Geoffrey (53)
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from ozeralper/Alper (610) 
on November 20, 2009 7:10:52 PM CST
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Hello Geoffrey. Very good idea but I think the head of the model has been cut too much and DOF is too much also. Focus is on her left eye. Right eye and her chin are blurry. Her leg is not definite at all. It might have been blurry a little but this is too much I guess. Regards. Alper
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The Yellow 5
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maslionomsirat/Masliono (4,018)
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from mojaveh/Mehrdad (7,309)
on November 20, 2009 7:08:44 PM CST
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Masliono, this is nice photo of yellow flower. Its sharp and well exposed. Just I wish it had shallower DOF to make busy background blurry. Besides, shadows are distracting. But flower itself looks great and attracts eyes. Regards, Mehrdad
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Capitolio en la Noche
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photopilot/Stephen (3,528)
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from mojaveh/Mehrdad (7,309)
on November 20, 2009 7:06:51 PM CST
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Good job, especially we have seen less photos from Cuba than the other countries. Exposure is fine. I think you used high ISO due to few noises in a BG. The far left car is distracting. camera angel is rightly adjusted. Regards. Mehrdad
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Capitolio en la Noche
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photopilot/Stephen (3,528)
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from jwphotography/Joseph (6,987)
on November 20, 2009 7:01:34 PM CST
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Excellent capture here, Stephen, especially considering the many difficulty factors. The manner with which the dome leans backward is yet another feature that both pleases and appeals. The glow emanating from the lamps, the contrasting colors between top and bottom, and especially, those vintage cars that the Cuban cabbies manage to maintain in running condition all add up to a wonderfully exciting photo. Congratulations!
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2 Sisters (Resubmit)
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maslionomsirat/Masliono (4,018)
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from aussiebluey/Timothy (1,426)
on November 20, 2009 6:56:54 PM CST
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Nice shot, I would have a lower F-stop for a shallower DOF, you can clean the noise up in the background with a program like Neat Image.
Tim
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Dusk on the Rock
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pmorash/Paul (26,573)
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from zjwah/Missy (32)
on November 20, 2009 6:56:23 PM CST
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Beautiful shot. For some reason the lighthouse looks surreal to me, like it's not quite real, I can't quite pinpoint why (maybe it is the light). Not that this is a negative thing, I actually think it makes the photo unique.
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Catching in the cornfield
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vidrean/Gabriel (29)
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from scottg/Scott (2,371)
on November 20, 2009 6:53:56 PM CST
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Love the exposure and colors - it IS film. Just want to see more of background which looks interesting but blocked.
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Breathing Out
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hankbenson/Hank (43,997)
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from ebn50/Evan (12,429)
on November 20, 2009 6:52:30 PM CST
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very pretty and surprisingly beautiful color scheme. Softness yet detailed just enough to be delicate and retain a precense...
Best,
Evan
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Dam at Fairfax Falls
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edj802/Eric (732)
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from edwin/Edwin K.W. (152,420)
on November 20, 2009 6:51:49 PM CST
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I like the angle shooting from the lower side to the falling water Eric, but I would move the camera a little to the right side to avoid the portion of rock framed at upper left. The power lines going across each other in the sky are better be cloned out, can be easily done. Think you have pushed too far in your post processing, the colors on the whole picture is having a washed out look.
Cheers......Edwin
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Heart Lake in Adirondacks - Resubmit
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luoh/Hank (10)
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from scottg/Scott (2,371)
on November 20, 2009 6:49:14 PM CST
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This looks better than your original but for me, the composition does not work. My eye is directed to the concentrated mist but this is not something to hold interest. It needs something that can be supported by the surrounding vibrant colors.
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