New Grass
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donschaeffer/Don (12,842)
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from alleykat/Darren (6,361) 
on May 3, 2013 2:24:43 PM CDT
The colours are nice to look at
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New Grass
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donschaeffer/Don (12,842)
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from algernon72/Keith (1,800) 
on May 3, 2013 2:22:52 PM CDT
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Sorry to say it but there is nothing at all I can see in this foto that has any merit. I'm a bit intriqued as to what you are trying to achieve here, perhaps you could inform us. Also, by the way, your critiques are way down in proportion to your postings. We try to give at least three for each foto we post, hope you don't mind me saying. Regards, Keith.
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The Last of The Shepards #2
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acborg/Alan (3,891)
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from donschaeffer/Don (12,842)
on May 3, 2013 1:53:28 PM CDT
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It's amazing that you got such a nice sharp photo under those rushed conditions. I really like how the arc shaped movement of the sheep moves my eye through the frame. The expression on the shepherd's face is priceless.
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At the bridge railing II
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jmrosz/Jan (204,145)
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from arek0michalak/Arkadiusz (1,230)
on May 3, 2013 1:29:56 PM CDT
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This is very good picture. Nice composition, and the excellent DOF is on the right place. Well used the idea of a white bridge and a dark background. I think,that is technically a fine picture.
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The Journey's Reward
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travelin1/John (227)
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from marinero/Zlatko (278)
on May 3, 2013 1:15:48 PM CDT
Photography is very beautiful, great staff but I think the frame here...unnecessary! Greeting!
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Cycling time trial
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jmrosz/Jan (204,145)
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from jaygheiser/Jay (9,907)
on May 3, 2013 1:15:28 PM CDT
Great scene, great colors, great lighting. The background is simple, the panning is effective, and I really like the facial expression on the subject. Its just a bit on the soft side, though. I don't know if that is a focus problem, or a bit of mismatch between the motion of the camera and the subject. All softness could be forgiven if the face and eyes were sharper.
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Stripey Elise
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jaypix/Jean-Pierre (27,861)
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from oevt/Oscar (32,308)
on May 3, 2013 1:14:12 PM CDT
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So lovely..so nice all background, the clothes, the stripes, the skin clearness ,the pose, the light, the frame focus, exposure are spot on......lovely.....Oscar
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(Blocked)
alan_cebohin/Alan (5)
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from oevt/Oscar (32,308)
on May 3, 2013 1:11:40 PM CDT
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I like the way the image gets lost in the dark a clark-oscuro? a short oh light heads?? the red contrast the leggins model and pose add up..regards.Oscar
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Nuit Blanche #2
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alleykat/Darren (6,361)
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from acborg/Alan (3,891)
on May 3, 2013 1:06:41 PM CDT
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Since I had critiqued your previous shot 'Nuit Blanche' I find this much less intriguing and interesting. Seems to have way too much clutter which makes it worse due to the dark background..my eyes are not drawn anywhere interesting.
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Freshness
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galina/Erika (1,483)
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from dodiddly/James (193)
on May 3, 2013 1:04:32 PM CDT
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I like this, nice colours and vibrance, normally with these shots the DOF is such that the background melts away, which is a good thing. You don't have that but I like the way it works with the flower behind leaning in to touch the main flower. Just one niggle though the light area just above where the two flowers meet is distracting and possibly could be cloned out. regards Jim
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Freshness
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galina/Erika (1,483)
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from jmrosz/Jan (204,145)
on May 3, 2013 1:02:48 PM CDT
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A beautiful flower, but the background is very distracting. Especially the white spots. Good exposure for the color. Unfortunately the background too restless for a good composition.
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York Minster
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diggeo/Georgios (609)
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from acborg/Alan (3,891)
on May 3, 2013 1:02:05 PM CDT
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Nice touristic shot but from a more professional side there is too much going on in this photo and too much distracting elements since there is no particular point of focus. My eyes are all over the place looking at this shot...taking this from a different point of view might have worked better.
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In a Dive
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npaoni/Nicholas (16,260)
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from acborg/Alan (3,891)
on May 3, 2013 12:31:39 PM CDT
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So hard to capture these small insects in flight that you deserve due credit. Considering the fact that the focus is also spot on makes it all the better. What type of flash did you use? The black bg on the top right is somehow bothering me but little you could do about that. Nice work.
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ektachrome/Francesco (13,040)
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from bobchatham1005/Bob (17,429)
on May 3, 2013 12:30:29 PM CDT
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This image has a nice assortment of interesting textures with a good composition. The young lady is waiting for the sun, hence the downward pose to imply a small mood of sadness, but for some reason, I wish she had made eye contact with the camera, just don't care for the eyes being closed. That being said, all in all, I think you did an admirable job with this shot. Love the subtle colors. Best Regards to you Francesco!
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Stripey Elise
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jaypix/Jean-Pierre (27,861)
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from ssal/Alex (27,370)
on May 3, 2013 12:24:33 PM CDT
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I like the sharpness, exposure and skin tone of this portrait.
The post of her upper body is fine. It adds to the dramatic by turning the head. But the right hand over the left is a bit too forced and not quite natural. Also, if you have to include that part of the hand, it would be better that the fingers are point away from the camera. That would avoid the unsightly spreading of the fingers and lens distortion (in some cases) that make the hand looks bigger. But in this...
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