Mr. Anna's
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mike9060/Mike (156)
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from michal235/Michal (123,054) 
on May 17, 2013 2:04:57 AM CDT
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Nice photo. However this photographed bird could be more sharpen. Besides, an edge of left wing is situated close to the left frame, and I would prefer to see a little more space on the right side of photo. Regards, Michal.
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Angelique
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antonvanzyl/Anton (1,759)
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from michal235/Michal (123,054)
on May 17, 2013 2:03:18 AM CDT
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Hi Anton. Natural expression on face and nice eyes contact. Nice portrait work, well done in B&W. However in my opinion few things here, first, sharpness could be partially better. Secondly, in my opinion light partially on face but especially on surface of right hand's finger is too harsh and in my opinion this light could be corrected or maybe simple set in another way. Third, maybe this cropping is intentionally here, however I would prefer to see a little more space...
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First shoot
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smayf/Shawna (4)
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from jaypix/Jean-Pierre (27,694)
on May 17, 2013 2:01:49 AM CDT
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Flash was necessary as the li ttle girl was backlit, but used in such a manner it's not very fortunate, as the light is too harsh, too frontal ... also, the horizon leans (an easy fix), and that 'mooring thing' (sorry I don't know what to call it ...) could have been use as a prop (for example, she could be leaning against it, hugging it ...) rather than a distraction. Good sharpness and lovely smile though, albeit a bit constrained ...
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Mr. Anna's
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mike9060/Mike (156)
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from jmrosz/Jan (203,871)
on May 17, 2013 1:58:14 AM CDT
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Shame about the many noise and unsharpness, otherwise it would have been a pretty picture. Nice composition, but right needs a little more space, so that the wing is free.
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S 2013.01
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oevt/Oscar (32,215)
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from jmrosz/Jan (203,871)
on May 17, 2013 1:38:52 AM CDT
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Nice pose of the model, good eye contact. I find her in tight image, a little more space around her was better. Still a nice composition. Too bad the hair is completely closed (dark).
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Mr. Anna's
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mike9060/Mike (156)
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from edwin/Edwin K.W. (223,941)
on May 17, 2013 1:38:28 AM CDT
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Nice hovering pose of the hummingbird Mike, the wing motion is definitely a good show of the aciton of the bird. Focus looks good on the hummingbird eye but you will need to sharpen the bird after your photo is downsized for Psig upload. DOF seems still insufficient for the shot at 7.1 and the light looks a bit flat on my screen. I had seen most of the best hummingbird posted in Psig are shot using the flash light, it can help to strengthen the colored feathers of the...
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yanki/Yanki (2,361)
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from jmrosz/Jan (203,871)
on May 17, 2013 1:34:52 AM CDT
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A beautiful high-key nude picture, the correct exposure gives a nice atmosphere (and color). Beautiful pose of the model, well that flapping cloth. All together gives a fine composition.
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Follow Me
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cliffb/Cliff (4,153)
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from jmrosz/Jan (203,871)
on May 17, 2013 1:32:23 AM CDT
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Good sharpness at the first cyclist, the DOF may be narrower (for me). Good lighting (color) and a nice composition. Well photographed.
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Dr. Mabuse's laboratory on a sunny day
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fz8/Adam (8,434)
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from jmrosz/Jan (203,871)
on May 17, 2013 1:28:57 AM CDT
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An old building with beautiful colors, but he is trapped in the picture, there should be more space around it (special left). But this may not be possible. The noise has been mentioned ... Keep on shooting..
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Giant Lizzard
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jmrosz/Jan (203,871)
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from edwin/Edwin K.W. (223,941)
on May 17, 2013 1:28:38 AM CDT
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Sharp, clear and detailed lizard Jan, like the colorful lizard head and the smiling lips of it. Those brighter spots which the lizard can be cloned out in my opinion and it is a pity that there is an OOF green at the lower left intruding in front of the lizard.
Cheers..........Edwin
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READY FOR WORK
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krasi263/Krasimira (26)
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from jmrosz/Jan (203,871)
on May 17, 2013 1:26:47 AM CDT
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Unfortunately you can not see what kind of work he does (fisherman, boatman,?). The exposure gives nice colors, but there is no good sharpness. The composition is nice and simple.
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Dr. Mabuse's laboratory on a sunny day
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fz8/Adam (8,434)
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from pwhysall/Peter (212)
on May 17, 2013 12:56:28 AM CDT
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I like this ominous-looking building - it's got some interesting lines and textures going on, and this angle could be made to work well.
However, I think there are some problems here - the shadow of the telegraph pole, at the bottom of the picture, is distracting; there's a lot of colour noise in the sky; and the framing is too tight at the left hand side.
Colour noise can easily be dealt with in Photoshop or Lightroom without softening the image. This would leave the...
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White ball walking
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0mm/Stefano (2,285)
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from edwin/Edwin K.W. (223,941)
on May 17, 2013 12:46:14 AM CDT
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The photo makes me smile Stefano, had you been waiting long for this opportunity?
But the white balloon doesn't seem to have a good pop up against the building wall which is also in white color, may be the photo would look better in color.
Composition wise, I would suggest to crop off the full portion of the building on the left.
Cheers.............Edwin
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How about some privacy I'm bathing
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mxoldguydave/Dave (1,058)
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from edwin/Edwin K.W. (223,941)
on May 17, 2013 12:31:15 AM CDT
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Interesting moment Dave, I like the interaction of the robin to the other bird, think they are communicating in their bird way. Composition looks fine for me but the clarity is seriously losing, you might have overdone in some steps during your post processing.
Cheers............Edwin
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Sea of Colour
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lakeshore/Chuck (215)
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from michal235/Michal (123,054)
on May 17, 2013 12:30:27 AM CDT
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Nice theme with this boat here in this scenery. However in my opinion the level could be better leveled. Regards, Michal.
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