Love is in the air
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zarzar/Zar (4,896)
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from roaringviking/Roar (2,273)  
on August 20, 2008 5:48:36 AM CDT
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I can't explain why, but I do like this composition. The platau out in the water gives a little bit feeling of that the photo is leaning to the left, but it seems to be straight. Easy to see that it is something between the woman and the dog.
Roar
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So hard...!
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arturdy/Artur (30,766)
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from wolli/Ian (44,232)
on August 20, 2008 5:48:32 AM CDT
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Artur, without your description I wouldn't have a clue what was going on here -m even then I wonder about your POV where her backside seems more important than whatever it is she is looking at. Framing left would have been beneficial IMO but you could crop the right side. Regards, Ian.
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After noon
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aasmundphotosig/Aasmund (976)
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from elva/Moore (917)
on August 20, 2008 5:45:10 AM CDT
Nice clock photo. (From the Neglected page.)
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code/Oliver (1,336)
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from marleyman64/Bob (240)
on August 20, 2008 5:44:34 AM CDT
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Great photo mann reminds me off a bright kinky lara croft lol. excellent use of colour n nice and sharp. i like her dazed expression too. well done
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Oppdal, Norway 24.01.08
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aasmundphotosig/Aasmund (976)
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from elva/Moore (917)
on August 20, 2008 5:44:19 AM CDT
Nice winter photo.
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Early spring in Dovrefjell
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aasmundphotosig/Aasmund (976)
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from elva/Moore (917)
on August 20, 2008 5:43:56 AM CDT
Nice landscape photo.
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Solar
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ingozaugnutt/Ingo (482)
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from elva/Moore (917)
on August 20, 2008 5:41:49 AM CDT
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Keyboard and music book compete too much for the eye's attention IMHO. Maybe crop a little off the left. (See comment.)
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fly Moni
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irisirina/Iris (24)
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from wolli/Ian (44,232)
on August 20, 2008 5:39:51 AM CDT
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Lovely model Iris but she does seem slightly over exposed to me (just a little too bright). This is a dynamic composition with nothing quite vertical or near horizontal. The blow outs on her face & neck are a bit of a distraction, a reflector or some fill flash might have helped here. I hope you will do more crits. Regards, Ian.
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3517 On track
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wolli/Ian (44,232)
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from arturdy/Artur (30,766)
on August 20, 2008 5:38:03 AM CDT
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I like kind of exposition You used, Ian. Very dynamical light increases mood of the photo perfectly. I'm not sure, but Your camera could be turned right a little - run of rails can be more interesting. Rgds, Artur
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code/Oliver (1,336)
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from slimandy/Andrew (10,845)
on August 20, 2008 5:36:41 AM CDT
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I've come back to this shot a few times because the bold colours don't look right yet somehow I still like the effect. The model and the pose work well, as does the viewpoint and DOF. The boldness of the colours and the red line around the frame should spoil it for me but they don't; it actually all works well. It's certainly eye catching. I might crop a little from the top to make the grass slightly less dominant.
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Roots
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mconnel/Michael (698)
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from elva/Moore (917)
on August 20, 2008 5:36:20 AM CDT
Sorry, this is too much of a jumble for me. (See comment.)
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Into the...
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borism100/Boris (3,386)
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from wolli/Ian (44,232)
on August 20, 2008 5:35:23 AM CDT
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Well composed/cropped Boris but this doesn't seem as sharp as I would hope - of course the alternative is to have this a little softer which would probably work but half sharp doesn't work for me. Beautiful colour. Regards, Ian.
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calm 2
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nothingman/Romas (486)
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from elva/Moore (917)
on August 20, 2008 5:32:55 AM CDT
Light is too harsh for me. Not very attractive or flattering IMHO. (See comment.)
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Capibaribe's fishermen
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spalonsi/Ediel (1,882)
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from slimandy/Andrew (10,845)
on August 20, 2008 5:31:44 AM CDT
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I think HDR for this shot was a bad idea. Maybe it is over-done too. The boat looks like it has a radio active glow all around it. It looks over sharpened too.
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Sunset
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celiks/Celik (4)
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from roaringviking/Roar (2,273)
on August 20, 2008 5:31:01 AM CDT
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As mentioned before me the focus could have been a bit better. But my first reaction was the outburned sun. It's to sharp. Maybe reduce the light in it and give it a little bit yellow from the photofilter tool in ps. U may fix the sharpness a little bit by go to unsharp mask - set treshold to zero for a start, Radius on 0,2 and pull up amount perhaps even all the way to 500. If it's still not enough U may click Sharpen, but that will probably be to much so after Sharpen U...
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